As a high school student, just beginning her journey into the field of writing, I was faced with a dilemma. I never knew what to write about. I always seemed to be stuck on the same few topics that I always wrote about. My junior year I started taking an Advanced Placement English class. The instructor would lead the class in a free writing exercise every morning before class started. Everyday he would give us a prompt; he would say a random word, ask a simple question, or show us an inspiring picture and we would have to write about it for any given amount of time. This free writing exercise is one of the things that I feel needs to be explored further in most writing classrooms, because of the help that it gave me as a writer.

There are many people who have arguments against free writing; they say that it does no good for the real writers in this world. I am completely against the view that free writing does not help the average writer. The in class prompts that the instructor gave us led me to write some of my best and most creative essays. Many writers have the same problem that I used to have, the problem of coming up with a topic for an essay or piece of writing. When writing on the prompts given by my instructor, my classmates and I easily took up the entire amount of given time scribbling away on the topic or whatever came to mind when the prompt was given to us.

An argument that some scholars have against free writing exercises is that there is no reason for a piece of writing, unless there is going to be an audience. In my experiences with free writing, that is what made it such a good exercise for me. In free writing you get to write with the knowledge that there will not be a judgmental person, or audience, reading it. I could say anything. I was able to write, without having to hold back, about whatever the topic brought to mind. If I thought a piece of writing that I came up with in the free writing sessions was worth being read, I could expand and edit that that essay into one that was appropriate for an audience. It was having the freedom from judgment and grading which led to my desire to be a writer. Sometimes being judged is one of the problems that many fellow writers face when beginning their own journeys toward becoming a writer.


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The argument that some scholars make against free writing about pieces of writing needing an audience as well as the argument that all writings should be directed towards an audience is something that I definitely do not believe. Granted, I agree with the question that some people ask; what good is a piece of writing if it is not written to be seen? This is a legitimate question. Writing should be seen, but not because it was written to be seen. It should be seen so that the readers can see what the writer thought, they can take it as they want to, but at least in any case as long as the writer is getting his or her thoughts out that is what truly matters. Their honest thoughts and views, not the edited versions, are what need to be shared, which I believe is the point of writing. That is why I actually do agree that writings should be seen, but I still do not believe that they should not be written for the audience. It is about the writer.

What I am saying is, when people begin writing for themselves, and writing the things that make them happy is when we get some of our best pieces of writings. Continually trying to please whatever audience you are ‘writing for,’ will lead you to long nights of editing, drafting, and fretting over making the perfect piece that no one will be able to judge. Writing for yourself will lead you to writing what your true thoughts are and when people are talking about things that they believe in, they tend to do so more easily than writing what the writer believes to be the audience’s views.

This is the problem that we see in most academic settings. Students are afraid to step on any toes, especially the toes of the ‘ultimate judge,’ the instructor. Therefore students tend to shy away from writing, especially in their own voice. Especially in classrooms where instructors make their point of view so clear that they let it get in the way of their grading of students’ works. While, I feel it unfair to stifle the opinion of the instructor completely, instructors need to realize that instead of judging the opinions of the students, they need to judge the writing instead; the grammar, organization, spelling, all of these things. They should not grade the student based upon the ideas that the student is sharing, but upon how these ideas are presented in the student’s writing.

That being said, while free writing is a great way for a writer to get ideas out, it does not necessarily help a writer grow in the grammar and organization of their writing. This is where the instructor is necessary. Grammar exercises are just as important as free writing exercises and just as helpful in the writing community. Without being able to write clearly and grammatically correct, the message that writer’s are trying to get across will not be taken as seriously as a well written essay, even if the opinion is completely opposite the opinion of the reader.

All of the arguing about what we need in the writing community is pointless. It is tearing apart the community, when all that needs to be done is to look at it from the other side. A large majority of the arguments that are had in our community seem to be arguing about different kinds of writing.

Posted by Kara on September 14, 2008
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Nicole on paragraph -1:

I can tell exactly where your thesis is :) I also like the anecdote you open with because it explains your personal connection with freewriting.

September 15, 2008 9:48 am
Nicole on paragraph -1:

I agree! Sometimes you have to write for yourself first. Re-read this paragraph for grammar/word usage.

September 15, 2008 9:51 am
Nicole on paragraph -1:

I’m noticing a pattern with your topic sentences… Try re-wording this one to make it less confusing and less repetitive. Your position is very clear and easy to understand.

September 15, 2008 9:54 am
Nicole on paragraph -1:

Excellent point here – Communication skills are just as important as the idea.

September 15, 2008 9:56 am
Nicole on paragraph -1:

I’m not sure what the point of this paragraph is… Maybe you could expand it into a conclusion and explain what you mean by “looking at it from the other side”.

September 15, 2008 9:58 am
Nicole on whole page :

Your ideas make sense and are easy to understand. Maybe you could add some textual support from the essays we read in class (probably Elbow on freewriting or Bartholomae on the importance of the instructor).

September 15, 2008 10:00 am
Katie B. on paragraph -1:

Love the begining…I had a teacher that did the same and it made me fall in love with writing!!!

September 15, 2008 10:50 am
Katie B. on paragraph -1:

“Judgment” is a strong word, but you used it very well in this paragraph.

September 15, 2008 10:52 am
Katie B. on paragraph -1:

When you mentioned the long nights of editing and drafting, I think we all can agree that is when editing and revising becomes no fun at all…great job!
When you started the paragraph in saying “What I am saying is…” I thought it was a little cliche lets try taking that whole section out and just starting with “When people begin writing for themselves…”

September 15, 2008 10:56 am
mjt42 on paragraph -1:

you could have given examples or names of the people that disagree, so the reader has a more concrete idea as to why free writing would be bad.

September 15, 2008 1:54 pm
mjt42 on paragraph -1:

i agree with this entire paragraph

September 15, 2008 1:56 pm
mjt42 on paragraph -1:

but couldn’t the writer be his/her own audience?

September 15, 2008 1:58 pm
mjt42 on paragraph -1:

this paragraph feels like a premature conclusion, it’s a good paragraph it just doesn’t seem like the right point of the paper to use it.

September 15, 2008 1:59 pm
mjt42 on paragraph -1:

i couldn’t agree more!!!

September 15, 2008 2:01 pm
mjt42 on whole page :

the paper had a good overall structure and point but i felt that it was choppy and you jumped from subject to subject, but overall i wouldn’t stress yourself over that.

September 15, 2008 2:03 pm
historymajor255 on paragraph -1:

After the word ‘topic’ in the last sentence I think you meant to say on instead of or. Just a typo.
~Katie M.

September 15, 2008 3:25 pm
historymajor255 on paragraph -1:

A couple more typos, mid-paragraph you say ‘that’ one too many time, and I’m no expert but maybe take a look at your comma usage.
Also, I like how you vary your sentence structure and length in this paragragh, it grabs your attention.
~Katie M.

September 15, 2008 3:30 pm
historymajor255 on paragraph -1:

I feel like you really change direction in this paragraph, although it is a good point, I think you need some sort of transition.
~Katie M.

September 15, 2008 3:36 pm
historymajor255 on whole page :

Thanks for sharing your paper, I really liked your ideas and you actually changed my mind a little (you’ll read my paper for Mon. where I talk about how I dislike freewriting) I thought the beginning of the paper was well organized and attention grabbing, however, maybe it would be helpful to the reader to put some of your other strong points in your first paragraph. I really like structured essays, so I’m sure many people will disagree with me, but I think it would help the reader keep focused through the entire paper. I felt that the end was a bit a bit jumbled just because of a few transitions that could be reworked and because I didn’t see the ideas in your thesis, which may just be my personal preference. Great Job, I hope you like mine too (yikes).
~Katie M. marc7308@bears.unco.edu

September 15, 2008 3:41 pm
Steven Powner on paragraph -1:

Try adding an additional line to help tranistion from your personal experience to the last line. As it stands it is choppy. The line could be about how it helped you.

September 15, 2008 5:42 pm
Steven Powner on paragraph -1:

Your first line contains many ideas with little puncuation to seperate them. I got lost in your first line. I recommend adding a comma or sperating the first line into seperate lines to remedy this

September 15, 2008 5:47 pm
Steven Powner on paragraph -1:

I agree with this paragraph. But it seems a little out of place, as in you take your one argument and expand it to the whole writing community. It detracts from your argument. I recommend that you eliminate this so the reader may finish by focusing on Freewriting and not begin to think about all the arguing that the academic community does.

September 15, 2008 5:54 pm
Steven Powner on whole page :

I can find the points that you make fairly easy. You have a strong voice and I can read the passion you have for the subject. I would recommend that you use less frequently the words ‘argument’ and ‘writing’. I get lost when there are three ‘writing’ in one sentence. It becomes hard to follow. Use synonyms or other phrasings to get your point across.

September 15, 2008 5:58 pm
Rachel Hillmer on paragraph -1:

Great introduction! Allows the reader to relate to your story right off the bat. Also good use of detail and support in giving examples.

September 15, 2008 6:00 pm
Rachel Hillmer on paragraph -1:

Good supporting paragraph. It sounds like the free writing exercise helps to initially develop a voice without fear of judgement that you can, later, apply to your writing that is read by an audience. Maybe say something about how helpful this exercise was in the development of voice.

September 15, 2008 6:11 pm
Rachel Hillmer on paragraph -1:

I agree! Writing is an emotional outlet that helps you deal with all your feelings and thoughts.

September 15, 2008 6:17 pm
Rachel Hillmer on paragraph -1:

Very strong and powerful paragraph!

September 15, 2008 6:19 pm
Rachel Hillmer on whole page :

Kara,

I thought this was a very good paper! I really liked your use of first person because that allows me to feel more connected to your piece.

My only suggestion that, I think, might make your paper even stronger than it already is, is to reference some of the academics we have read in class or that you have read on your own. I believe Elbow would be a great person to refer to or quote in support of your arguement.

I hope my comments were helpful and great work!

Rachel Hillmer

September 15, 2008 6:26 pm
Richard Melick on paragraph -1:

Great opening. Strong and strait forward. Gives a great visual without being too wordy and in-depth.

September 15, 2008 8:49 pm
Richard Melick on paragraph -1:

Maybe a different opening to this paragraph? It feels a little like the previous one. Great points on the different arguments though

September 15, 2008 8:50 pm
Richard Melick on whole page :

Not much to say here other than you had your argument laid out in a great manner that allows the reader to easily follow your train of thought. A recommendation would be to change the openings of some of the paragraphs – diversify if you might. You conclusion is strong and keeping with the idea that there is no solid answer. Good job.

-Richard

September 15, 2008 8:53 pm
goafr on paragraph -1:

I really like the idea of a “journey into writing,” but I would suggest that you keep the way in which you refer to yourself as consistent. (you say ‘her’ and then ‘I’, make sure they are the same) :-)

September 15, 2008 9:24 pm
goafr on whole page :

This is overall a good paper. The only thing I would really suggest is to either expand or make more room for the grammatical teaching to be included–only because you throw in at the last minute that it is equally as important but do not give it equal importance in your paper. Though, Elbow argues that in his classes he focuses only on writing even though he believes a balance between writing and reading is the best type of class merely because most classes focus only on reading….so maybe you don’t have to elaborate more since free writing seems to be the road less traveled in this case. just a thought.

September 15, 2008 9:36 pm
MattL on whole page :

Your essay is very well written. I enjoyed reading it. I constructed my paper a bit differently I used quotes to define the argument support my points It would be important to know if that was what Dr A was expecting. Aside from that, I think your essay would be better served if you defended free-writing as an educational activity. I believe that is more to the point of the Academic conversation.

September 16, 2008 11:24 am
Audra V on paragraph -1:

I absolutely love when teachers do this. I agree that it’s not only good practice and enjoyable, but also opens the students up and helps them

September 16, 2008 11:37 am
Audra V. on paragraph -1:

I think it’s good that you argued and showed both sides here. While free writing is great, learning grammar is also very important.

September 16, 2008 11:42 am
Auda on whole page :

I think this paper is well written. You express your ideas well. There were a few spots that seemed a little confusing at first, like at the end of paragraph 5. The last sentence has a great point but I just thought it to be slightly confusing when I first read it. Overall I enjoy your paper and I agree with your points. Free writig is important, but so is grammar and organization.

September 16, 2008 11:52 am
crfatka on whole page :

I liked your stance on free-writing because I also feel that it is helpful just writing about whatever comes to my mind. I think for the final essay you should say which ’scholars’ you are refering to. In many paragraphs you argue against ’scholars’ but never say who they are.

September 16, 2008 12:49 pm
Caitlin on whole page :

I like your stance on free writing. I love free writing and getting my ideas on paper without being judged. I think you should state who the ’scholars’ are that you are arguing against. Your arguments are good but I am confused as to who these ’scholars’ are.

September 16, 2008 12:51 pm
Jacqueline Van Hazel on whole page :

I liked how you focused on the topic of freewriting as opposed to controlled writing based on what a student has been taught. You added your opinion yet you didn’t let it drown out the theme of your essay. Grammar was good and so was the flow. Nice job

September 16, 2008 1:00 pm
prat9517 on paragraph -1:

I completely agree with this. So many instructors let their opinions bleed all over the classroom. What is important is being able to learn how to communicate effectively.

September 16, 2008 2:46 pm
prat9517 on paragraph -1:

I like your introduction. It is a good jumping off point. It draws the reader in and lets them know that this is not going to be a dry essay. Good job.

September 16, 2008 2:47 pm
prat9517 on whole page :

I enjoyed this paper. I think that you have some good points about the writing process. I especially like how you dislike the whole writing for the audience thing in favor of writing for yourself. I share similar views with you as far as the importance of learning grammar and structure but not forcing students to write in any specific way.

Some suggestions. Throughout the essay you repeat a lot of words like writer, writing, etc. I would find other ways to express this. Some sentences are redundant: like essay or piece of writing in paragraph 2. Also, I would mix up your sentences a bit. Try playing around with long and short sentences. Also, there are some simple grammatical errors. I won’t point them all out but be sure to look carefully before you turn in your final draft.

Again, I really like your point of view and style with this piece. The things I would change is the repetition of words and varying the structure of your sentences (your first paragraph does an awesome job of flowing smoothly and keeping the reader interested, use it as a reference).

Also, I think you need a stronger ending. I wouldn’t change the point because I think it is and awesome point about the arguing being useless; rather, find a strong way to hit the point home. Maybe use the tried and true method of tying the beginning to the end by bringing back your personal experiences you described in the first paragraph and use them to convey your final though in the last paragraph.

Good job!

September 16, 2008 2:55 pm
Sarah Shinners on paragraph -1:

good opening

September 16, 2008 2:59 pm
Audra D> on whole page :

Overall I really enjoyed your paper. It’s well written, organized nicely, and makes a clear point. However, you lost me with your last paragraph or maybe not so much lost me as just threw me off a little bit. Perhaps rewording it? That said, nicely done!

- Audra D.

September 16, 2008 3:10 pm
Sarah Shinners on paragraph -1:

You could put some specific examples. Instead of just “some scholars say…” try putting the name of a specific scholar, and maybe even a quote.

September 16, 2008 3:18 pm
Sarah Shinners on paragraph -1:

The first sentence and the fourth sentence in this paragraph are a little awkward. I would try shortening them a little bit, or maybe separating some of the phrases by commas.

September 16, 2008 3:21 pm
Sarah Shinners on paragraph -1:

The first and last sentences in this paragraph are also a little awkward. Try beginning the first sentence with a different phrase instead of “What I’m saying is…” and then the last sentence could be split into two sentences.

September 16, 2008 3:23 pm
Sarah Shinners on paragraph -1:

I like the phrase “ultimate judge.” The sentence that begins with “Especially” is a fragment, and the sentence that begins with “while” has an unneeded comma.

September 16, 2008 3:25 pm
Sarah Shinners on whole page :

Kara, overall a good paper. I like your ideas about freewriting and the role of the instructor. It sounds like you really thought about your opinion and took a side. Good job. The only things that need to be worked on is to change the wording of some of the sentences, which are a little awkward (see specific comments within the paragraphs), and to watch your typos. Otherwise, it was good and I enjoyed reading it.
Sarah Shinners

September 16, 2008 3:28 pm
Meagan Birely on whole page :

Kara,
You have a great paper here. I really like how personal it is, and how you connect to the topic so well. Your opening paragraph story sets up the paper very nicely. My other favorite part was the part about how you believe people would write better if they stopped worrying about other’s opinions. This was a strong argument in your paper, and I could see your passion on that argument coming through. My only suggestion is to maybe bring in one of the arguments we have read and put it in where you say “some scholars argue.” But overall I really enjoyed reading your paper, you have quite the start! Thanks for sharing Kara!
-Meagan-

September 16, 2008 4:05 pm
nono8 on paragraph -1:

I know what you mean about sometimes getting stuck on the same topics! In the first sentence, “her journey” does not make sense to me. Are you refering to your journey?

September 16, 2008 4:47 pm
nono8 on paragraph -1:

The phrase “in class” should probably be hypenated. :)

September 16, 2008 4:52 pm
nono8 on paragraph -1:

This topic sentence is rather confusing. It is very long and needs to be broken down and controlled with some punctuation.

September 16, 2008 4:56 pm
nono8 on whole page :

Kara,
I love the ideas you presented in your argument. I like how you explained how the free writing activities helped improve you as a writer and how the free writes may help others share their authentic voice. Your message is nicely stated. There are some grammatical errors and the conclusion doesn’t seem to fit with your whole paper. Thank you for sharing your ideas.

Noel

September 16, 2008 5:03 pm
nono8 on paragraph -1:

I don’t understand what you mean by “tearing apart the community,” and how does that correlate to the rest of your paper? The concluding sentences seemed somewhat random in comparison with what you wrote about in the body paragraphs.

September 16, 2008 5:06 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

Don’t really care for your opening sentence. “just beginning her journey into the field of writing” this to me is a little strange. I feel that without this is would still be good.

September 16, 2008 5:39 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

I would agree!!

September 16, 2008 5:41 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

Maybe mention which scholars to add a little more depth to this. Also I feel it somewhat says what is stated before but just differently.

September 16, 2008 5:42 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

Nicely stated!

September 16, 2008 5:43 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

“This is the problem that we see in most academic settings. Students are afraid to step on any toes, especially the toes of the ‘ultimate judge,’ the instructor. Therefore students tend to shy away from writing, especially in their own voice.” Love this part!!! A bit confused on the last sentence though.

September 16, 2008 5:44 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

Great points!!

September 16, 2008 5:45 pm
stan4562 on paragraph -1:

Not really sure what you are trying to conclude here?!

September 16, 2008 5:46 pm
Chelsea on paragraph 4:

Look at the first line in this paragraph and then look at the first line in the one before. They are very similar, try to find another way of saying it like “Another key element that scholars use against free writing is….”. This way the sentance can also be used as a transition from one paragraph to another.

September 17, 2008 10:41 am
Chelsea on whole page :

I liked your paper but I think you could use better transitions from one paragraph to another.

September 17, 2008 10:46 am
dra08 on whole page :

test post

September 18, 2008 11:15 am
hein9311 on whole page :

This is an ideal example of the “5 paragraph” style of writing. This was one of the easiest to read and cut to the point clearly; it’s obvious that you’ve had experience with “controlled” creative writing. What I mean by that is you’re able to write with your own voice while still writing within the standards of the classroom setting. Very well done.

September 21, 2008 3:33 pm
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